19. Drafty Writing

I am having difficulty with my new intro and I think I will use the material I listed below to redo my intro as well as introducing the new subjects.  

• In college, majors are different from one another and can have many components to them, but it doesn't necessarily mean that they do not use a lot of the same learning materials.  
• Introduce other subjects and state their major's and their transcripts.  Then weave in first subject to compare the other two.
• Define interpretations vs. plot summaries to give audience more of an idea of what you mean by interpretation.